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I think i finally have it, but just not sure. When you see this what are your thoughts? To much? This person is crazy?
Thursday, August 11, 2011
What is your Opinion?
I think i finally have it, but just not sure. When you see this what are your thoughts? To much? This person is crazy?
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3 Monstrously awesome verbiage!:
I would fix the font to have it be less confusing and easier to read. I think I would also choose a picture that has less going on, like a flower, or landscape, or maybe even dim the picture a bit so that the words stand out more. There are words, like 'include' on the right side that should be on the same line, within the same word. Option A, towards the bottom, fix the 're-lease' word so that it part of the same word.
What are you doing with this? Printing it up on cards and giving them out? I'm excited for you. What schooling or work related jobs have you had to decide to go 'professional?' I had no idea! Good job, and good luck!
I think it looks good, but I agree with the comments above. There are the 2 words that need to be on the same line instead separate (includes, and release), and I noticed "choosoning" should be "choosing". The light blue at the top left is hard to read, but maybe if you dulled the picture behind it a little you'd be able to see it better.
I do think you are on the right track, and that it looks good overall. Good luck with your photography business! I hope it works out well for you!
Thanks for opinions. I'm in the makings of a newer and better one thanks. :D
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